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I know this is a lot, but this website has some info on creating a thesis. Usually a thesis is a brief statement that describes your whole paragraph.

 

Hope it helps!

 

I'm assuming that this is some sort of argumentative essay where you need text evidence to support your claims.

 

Your thesis goes against common thinking about standardized tests and why they aren't applicable to us now. This can capture the reades attention but it is much to brief because you go right into your reasoning. According to the website link, your thesis needs to answer the "So what" question on it's so important.