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Is "Overall, students buy their lunch from the cafeteria." a grammatically correct sentence?

Or does it have to be: ""Overall, most students buy their lunch from the cafeteria."

 Dec 4, 2014

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The first sentence is clumsy and arguably wrong. Replace the word "overall" with "mostly" and you've nailed it! 

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The first one doesn't make much sense to me 

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That's what I thought, but I just want to verify before I add it to my list of errors in our Yearbook.

 Dec 4, 2014
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Mathematician, you don't really need the word "overall," anyway.

"Most students buy their lunch from the cafeteria."  

"Most" implies "overall."

"Overall" is superfluous language.

 P.S.......that's as much as I know about the English language........

 Dec 4, 2014
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My question is: does the first sentence work?

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I like Chris's sugestion best.  "Overall" is meaningless.   It is worse than meaningless.  It is confusing.

And I still do not think that the first sentence makes sense.  

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Hey, Mathematician.....if you really want the "definitive" answer to your question....send it to kitty<3......she's the real "English pro" on here.......if she doesn't know......no one does......

 

 

 Dec 4, 2014
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The first sentence is clumsy and arguably wrong. Replace the word "overall" with "mostly" and you've nailed it! 

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