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Here is the landforms.condensation-precpition-collection-evaporation.The water cycle isThe cycle of processes by which water circulates between the earth's oceans, atmosphere, and land, involving precipitation as rain and snow, drainage in streams and rivers, and return to the atmosphere by evaporation and transpiration.Dew is not rain.It is condensation on grass.About 95 percent of the earth's surface is water.The rest 5 is land.The amount of water never changes.The water that we drink today is animal or human spit the has been cleaned out and made ready to use.The earths water never cme from another plannet,it was just there when earth was created.Water that has turned into Water Vapor spens about 10 days floating in the air.This was my report

 

 

 

Does this have nay mistakes that I can fix?

 Apr 7, 2017
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Planet* 

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Put spaces after periods

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Here are the landforms. Condensation, precipitation, collection, then evaporation. The water cycle is the cycle of processes by which water circulates between the earth's oceans, atmosphere, and land, involving precipitation as rain and snow, drainage in streams and rivers, and the returns to the atmosphere by evaporation and transpiration. Dew is not rain, it is the condensation on grass. About 95 percent of the earth's surface is water.The last 5 is land. The amount of water never changes on Earth.The water that we drink today is animal or human saliva that has been purified and made ready to use again. The Earths water never came from another planet,it was just there when earth was created.Water that has turned into water vapor spends about 10 days floating in the air. This was my report

 

 

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I just corrected it for you. Just copy and paste it now.

 Apr 7, 2017
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This is a further edit of RS's version.

Purple is my writing.

 

Here are the landforms: condensation, precipitation, collection, and evaporation. The water cycle is the cycle of processes by which water circulates between the earth's oceans, atmosphere, and land, and involves precipitation as rain and snow, drainage in streams and rivers, and return to the atmosphere by evaporation and transpiration. Dew is not rain; it is the condensation on grass. About ninety-five percent of the earth's surface is water. The remaining five percent is land. The amount of water never changes on Earth. The water that we drink today is animal or human saliva that has been purified and made ready to use again. Earth's water never came from another planet, it was just there when Earth was created. Water that has turned into water vapor spends about ten days floating in the air.

 

I tried to change it only very little. :)

 Apr 7, 2017
edited by hectictar  Apr 7, 2017
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Yes, that's good.

 Apr 7, 2017

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